writing in water

October 11, 2008

days

weeks

months

years

lifetimes

millenia

breaths

breaths

breaths

formless traces

One Response to “writing in water”

  1. amuirin said

    my eyes hurried down the words, and almost went out on ‘formless trances’-

    but then, I saw the mistake. Went back and read it slow-
    it worked much better that way.

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